Monday, September 26, 2011

Persuasive Writing.


Should we have bubble gum at school?

Hello, I am going to talk to you about having bubble gum at school.
Firstly, I think bubble gum should be allowed in school because at lunchtime and morning tea when you and your friends get bored you can have a competition of who can blow the biggest bubble.
Secondly, all teachers think that kids stick their bubble gum around the classroom but we are all sensible enough not to do that.
Thirdly, most kids like bubble gum. Its tarty so why can't we have them.
Lastly, bubble gum should be allowed at school.
By Adi.

Should MHP have a pet day?

MHP should not have a pet day.
Firstly, we should not have pet day because our pets would go crazy and wild.
Secondly, where should we put our pets and they do not have anything to eat.
Thirdly, what should we do with them at morning tea and lunch time? Where should we take them when they need to go to the toilet?
Lastly, the pets will rip and mess up the room. Like cats they'll try to eat someone else's pet fish.
Therefore, we should not have pet day at MHP.
By William.

Should MHP have a pet day?

I think we shouldn't have pet day at MHP.
Firstly, there would be too much barking and other noises. We wouldn't be able to work because there would be too much noise.
Secondly, if by mistake a dog or bird got loose we would have to chase them around the whole school.
Thirdly, a student can be allergic to the pets that have fur.
Lastly, the dog might not like you or even a cat and they might hurt you. If something happened the teachers would never have a pet day again.
That is why I think its not a good idea to bring a pet to school.
By Akira.

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